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Epilogue - aka bonus sex scene

"Practice was pretty tough today," Jared says conversationally, as if they aren't about to get naked together.

Jensen rolls his eyes as he pulls Jared's shirt over his head tossing it onto the floor – it's not every day that his roommate is going to be away all night and they'd have the place all to themselves. Jensen wants to take full advantage of the situation.

"You know if I didn't know you so well I might be offended that you're still talking about practice when I'm trying to get you naked," Jensen sighs, unbuttoning Jared's jeans and kissing him.

"It's a good thing you know me so well then," Jared grins at him.

"Yes, I suppose it is." Jensen pushes Jared back on his bed, working his jeans off and throwing them on to the floor before straddling his hips. "I think it would be better if you just forget about practice for a little while."

"I suppose so, but I mean you thought Carnochan was tough on us today too, right?" Jared asks.

"A bit I guess." Jensen shrugs and pulls off his own shirt and starts working on his jeans.

"I mean, we weren't doing too badly, but he felt the need to come down on us like that."

"Uh huh." Jensen slides down between Jared's legs.

"I get that it's his job to make us the best band and all that, but he's not going to get results by yelling at us like that."

"Mmhmm." Jensen has learned over the past few months he and Jared have been together, since they started at the University of Texas back in August, that sometimes it's best to just let Jared vent. But he's found there are a few ways he can get Jared to focus on something other than band from time to time.

"It just gets me so frustrated when things like that happen." Jared would likely go on like this for at least another hour, but luckily he had Jensen there to intervene.

"I know it does. Just relax." Jensen soothes wrapping hand around Jared's cock stroking him slowly, his thumb swiping over the head when he pulls up toward the tip.

It seems like Jared wants to keep going in his tirade, but he can't seem to muster up the energy when Jensen leans in close and licks the head of his cock. And when Jensen parts his lips taking Jared into his mouth, Jensen knows that all thoughts of continuing vanish from Jared's mind.

Jensen prides himself in being able to get Jared to forget about things like that so easily and of course he happens to love doing this for Jared as well. Jared grasps at Jensen's hair, his fingers unable to find purchase, groaning when Jensen presses forward.

"Fuck, that's nice." Jared lets his head fall back onto the pillow and moans, his voice all strung out. His hips start thrusting, pressing further between Jensen's full pink lips. Jared never lasts long like this, not after he's been ranting, not when he watches Jensen's cheeks hollow as he pulls back sucking hard around his shaft, and tonight is no different.

He gasps hips pressing up insistently, demanding, seeking, and Jensen is right there, lips wrapped tight around Jared and sucking drawing out ever last bit until all Jared can do is whimper and pull at Jensen.

Eventually Jensen lets Jared pull him up beside him, lets Jared kiss him, lets his tongue press into his mouth and turn him so now Jensen is the one on his back, lets Jared thrust against him as they kiss, nips and sucks at the tongue warm in his mouth.

"Want me to fuck you, Jen?" Jared croons, as he pulls back, Jensen can feel him hard against his hip. And all Jensen can do is lick his lips and nod, the motion frantic and full of need. His pupils are blown and his legs are spread in a silent invitation.

Jared fumbles for the lube, and first pushes a finger into Jensen soon followed by a second, stretching Jensen. "You ready?" Jared asks, and Jensen nods again. He's been ready since before they started any of this, and he's very nearly desperate now.

Jared fumbles for a condom, ripping the foil open with his teeth and rolling it on quickly before he grabs hold of himself, and changes the angle of his hips, until he's pressed right against Jensen. He makes it slow, making Jensen mewl in protest and wrap his legs around Jared's hips tighter wanting to pull him in deeper – and if Jared hadn't had such a good hold on Jensen's hips, he would have succeeded.

After what seems like forever Jared is seated fully inside Jensen, though he doesn't pause for long before he's thrusting. Hard and fast, giving Jensen just what he wants, driving him down into the mattress with each thrust.

"Fuck," Jensen swears.

"Like that?" Jared breaths against Jensen's neck, right before he bites down worrying the skin beneath his teeth. There will be a mark there before they're even finished for the night, but Jensen likes that – likes seeing the way Jared marks him.

It's almost like Jensen can't breathe even as he sucks in deep lung-fulls of air with each gasp and moan that Jared wrings out of him, as Jared thrusts deep again and again. His rhythm is relentless pushing Jensen closer and closer, drawing it out of him a bit more with each thrust.

"God, want you to come," Jared gasps and Jensen knows he's close. He can feel it in the way Jared shudders when he drives into him, the way he's biting at his lower lip, and the way he's looking at Jensen now.

That look, it's very nearly enough to send Jensen right over the edge and when Jared keeps plunging into him – well it's more than Jensen can take and he gasps, his back arching sharply and pulling Jared down to slam their mouths together as he comes, rocking against Jared letting him swallow each of his moans, letting Jared sweep them out of his mouth with his tongue.

And then Jared is coming, giving one more hard thrust, enough to push Jensen up the bed so he's pressed against the wall at the head of the bed, until he's collapsed. Jared buries his head in Jensen's shoulder, pressing kisses into whatever skin he can find until he catches his breath.

Jared rolls off Jensen pulling Jensen with him. Jensen ends up with his head on Jared's chest, eyes drifting shut as he listens to the sound of Jared's heart beat and moves with the motion of Jared's chest rising and falling.

"You know, Carnochan really was being an ass today," Jared starts up again, like they hadn't just spent the last hour or so fucking.

"Jared?"

"Yeah?"

"If you don't stop talking about Carnochan or practice today I am going to kick you out of my bed."

Jared laughs and presses his face against Jensen’s neck. Jensen can feel the grin still spread across Jared’s face pressed against his shoulder – and they manage to spend the rest of the night without bringing Carnochan up even once.

Part 1, Part 2, Epilogue

Date: 2009-01-23 07:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fate-envies-us.livejournal.com
Well, as much shit as this thing gave you, you did a good job with it. I liked it. :)

Date: 2009-01-23 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Oh good, I'm glad you liked it - I think the length just freaked me out a lot and I expected it to not work together or anything.

Date: 2009-01-23 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinnerforhire.livejournal.com
You are a goddess. Seriously. This is absolutely fantastic and I loved every second of it. I love all the little details you put in, but this was my favorite:

It's not like he was one of those kids who passed out during practice, fell forward and broke his jaw. He's not the kid who got an abnormal heartbeat because of the heat. He isn't any of those kids.

I love Chris being the guy who knows everything and the guy who's always got the beer, and I love Jared freaking out but trying to act like he isn't (and I would really love to know what Jared was doing those weekends he disappeared *hint, hint*).

You did an awesome, awesome job and it was totally worth the wait! Thank you so, so much. *hugs*

Date: 2009-01-23 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
I'm so glad you liked this :D

It seriously took over my brain, I was going to write you're Dean/Castiel prompt, but I just couldn't after reading this one. And it demanded to be written.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it *hugs*

Date: 2009-01-24 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sinnerforhire.livejournal.com
It was wonderful, I'm so glad you wrote it.

It's good to know that band geeks in Texas are exactly the same as band geeks in Pennsylvania. :) The only thing that would have made it more like my camp experience would have been them making out under a piano.

Date: 2009-01-23 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattoo-kink.livejournal.com
Awww... I really enjoyed this.

Oh boys!!!

Chris was awesome and even Chad was ... Chad! *ggg*

Very well written. Thanks for this.

*mems*

Date: 2009-01-23 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Thank you! I've never written anything with Chris or Chad it in before, so it's good to hear I got those two right. Heh :D

Date: 2009-01-23 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] breakharmony.livejournal.com
J2 @ band camp FTW! :-)

Ok, so I'm normally a lurker, and I normally don't read bottom!Jen, but I watched Drumline the other day and have been missing marching band like crazy since then and when I saw this I literally squealed. So I figured I should let you know how much I enjoyed it, lol. I especially loved the characterization and the typical awkwardness involved in starting a relationship. Very well written, great job!

Date: 2009-01-24 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Heh, well I'm glad I managed to get you to read something you normally wouldn't.

Thanks :D

Date: 2009-01-23 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elless18.livejournal.com
This brought back so many memories of band camp during high school. *gets all nostalgic*

The only thing that could make Jared more perfect- besides him being gorgeous, smart, sweet, and a good actor- is him being a band geek. :D

Date: 2009-01-24 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
I miss all that band stuff, kind of wish I'd stuck with it through high school, but alas I changed to orchestra ... because I am not one of those dedicated Texas kids who can put up with marching in the summer time.

Glad you liked it :D

Date: 2009-01-24 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparkysparky.livejournal.com
STILL HOT! <3 *loves all over this fic*

Date: 2009-01-24 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
&hearts thanks for all your help with this bb *hugs*

Date: 2009-01-24 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparkysparky.livejournal.com
You're welcome BB! <3

Date: 2009-01-24 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] z3s-keep-going.livejournal.com
awww loved this! Great job

Date: 2009-01-25 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2009-01-24 03:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Aw, this is awesome! I love the awkwardness of figuring out where they stand together, and Jared's hovering over passing-out!Jensen was lovely.

Date: 2009-01-25 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Thank you :D

That awkwardness was really a pain to write, but that's just the way they wanted to be.

Date: 2009-01-24 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 9thof9.livejournal.com
That was great.

I love band camp stories, both real and fictional. I've even heard a few real ones where the flute players were the kinky ones you had to watch out for.

I'm not from Texas so I certainly didn't know the state capital in Austin was bigger than the US Capital. I suppose that's how Texas got the saying that "Everything's bigger in Texas". Well, that and Jared.

Date: 2009-01-25 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Not only is our capital bigger than the US capital, but it's also pink. :D

I'm not surprised that there really are those sort of kinky flute players, it's always the ones you least expect.

Glad you liked. :D

Love your icon, btw

Date: 2009-01-27 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 9thof9.livejournal.com
Seriously, it's pink?

Thanks. I snagged a bunch of naughty icons from different folks in [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com].

Date: 2009-01-27 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Yep, it's made of Pink Granite.

See it's pinkness (http://www.hometownusa.com/tx/images/Texas_state_capitol.jpg)

Date: 2009-01-27 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 9thof9.livejournal.com
That's awesome.

And no disrespect, but that's so funny. Texan men are so macho and stuff but your capital is pink. If that isn't ironic, I don't know what is.

Date: 2009-01-24 04:28 pm (UTC)
ext_19642: j2 -Silly boys! (Default)
From: [identity profile] smidirini.livejournal.com
Awwww, this is so sweet. Camp fics are always so fascinating to me because we don't have those here and they seem like such a glimpse into another world or somethig :P ♥

Date: 2009-01-25 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
You don't have camps at all? That seems like a travesty to me. I went to all sorts of camps growing up, girl scout camp, band camp, cheerleading camp, twilight camp (not related to the book).

Glad you liked it though :)

Date: 2009-01-25 08:23 pm (UTC)
ext_19642: j2 -Silly boys! (spn_ dracula_i has coupon)
From: [identity profile] smidirini.livejournal.com
Well, yeah, we had scout camp, but that was sort of the purpose of the scouts - to learn how to camp and then head off into the wilderness a few times a year and test your skills :P

The only Summer Camp we had were week-long events that ran 9am to 3pm during the summer holidays and they involved a lot of physical activities like kayaking and gorge walking and sports :P

By the time I was out of school we started running more art-based camps like that - but the word 'camp' is a misnomer because there was no camping or sleeping of any kind involved. Everything ran through school hours - like summer daycare.

Date: 2009-01-25 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lekkerstuk.livejournal.com
Lovely story, and the band camp backdrop worked perfectly for their summer lovin'. Thanks!

Date: 2009-01-25 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Thanks :)

You'll have to thank [livejournal.com profile] sinnerforhire for the band camp aspect, but it really was perfect for the Jared and Jensen :)

Date: 2009-01-25 10:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
A really great fic I really enjoyed it.
I felt kind sorry for Jensen in the beginning, I mean, Jared did come on to him and then he disappeared and assumed things without talking them through and poor Jensen didn't have a clue where he stood.
But they finally got together and how that last part was awesome. *hugs*

Date: 2009-01-25 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Yep, I am always a fan of awkward Jensen in fic where he's confused and torn. Jared just does that to him.

Glad you liked it :)

Date: 2009-01-25 06:18 pm (UTC)
ext_2087: SGA (BSG Kara tattoo)
From: [identity profile] tharaist.livejournal.com
That was very cute, especially the kissing and freaking out scenes!

Date: 2009-01-25 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Thank you :)

I was a little worried about the kissing scenes, so it's good to hear they turned out well. thanks!

Date: 2009-02-11 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nerowill.livejournal.com
What fun! I'm glad it worked out for them. Being a Longhorn I appreciated your Austin comments! :)

Date: 2009-02-11 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Heh well I'm an Austinite myself and I couldn't help myself from adding a few Austin details in this.

Glad you liked it :)

Date: 2009-02-22 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuhekabir.livejournal.com
i enjoyed this, Thanks for sharing :)

Date: 2009-05-03 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
you're very welcome, I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2009-04-18 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alena2b.livejournal.com
this was so cute! loved it!

Date: 2009-05-03 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravannac.livejournal.com
Hot and sweet, loved it
Rav xx

Date: 2009-05-03 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
Well thank you again :)

Very glad you liked this

Date: 2011-05-09 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simplybeing.livejournal.com
Oh, man, this is FANTASTIC. I have such a thing for band geeks and camp stories and them being roommates and college stories and and and. AND OMG I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS. <3

PS. I'm adding it to [livejournal.com profile] j2_recs, just fyi. :D

Date: 2011-05-09 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/acquiescence_/
I too have a love of band geeks, I'm so glad you enjoyed - thanks for the adding too :)

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