You are a goddess. Seriously. This is absolutely fantastic and I loved every second of it. I love all the little details you put in, but this was my favorite:
It's not like he was one of those kids who passed out during practice, fell forward and broke his jaw. He's not the kid who got an abnormal heartbeat because of the heat. He isn't any of those kids.
I love Chris being the guy who knows everything and the guy who's always got the beer, and I love Jared freaking out but trying to act like he isn't (and I would really love to know what Jared was doing those weekends he disappeared *hint, hint*).
You did an awesome, awesome job and it was totally worth the wait! Thank you so, so much. *hugs*
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Date: 2009-01-23 01:14 pm (UTC)It's not like he was one of those kids who passed out during practice, fell forward and broke his jaw. He's not the kid who got an abnormal heartbeat because of the heat. He isn't any of those kids.
I love Chris being the guy who knows everything and the guy who's always got the beer, and I love Jared freaking out but trying to act like he isn't (and I would really love to know what Jared was doing those weekends he disappeared *hint, hint*).
You did an awesome, awesome job and it was totally worth the wait! Thank you so, so much. *hugs*