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Title: She Whispered Yes
Author: [livejournal.com profile] acquiescence_
Disclaimer: Rowling owns them all
Rating: PG
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Summary: Ron has something to ask Hermione
Word Count: 333
A/N: okies, so here is a short story I wrote, I'm still looking for someone to beta read it, but so far no responses. so this is just a rough draft. and yes it's totally a fanfic but I figure that's always a safe place to start. I'm really trying to write something of my own, as in non-fanfic in this style, but I was having trouble. It's my first fanfic ever.



She whispered yes softly, her eyes on the floor

The wind blew softly through the open window bristling the hair on the back of Ron’s neck; he shivered.

He watched Hermione closely for her reaction to his unasked question.

“So do you want to … um …” Ron blushed furiously, his freckled face turning a bright shade of red she could just make out in the dark.

Hermione smiled softly as Ron struggled to find the right words to tell her what he had been trying to tell her for the past half hour.

“There’s something I really want to tell you,” he said finally.

“What is it Ron?” Her eyes sparkled in the moonlight that shone through the window.

She brought her hand up to touch his arm, then pulled away quickly, unsure if she should.

Ron kicked the floor, “You know you’re one of my best friends, right? I know I don’t always act like it, but it’s true. I love spending time with you, even when I act stupid. I’m just rambling now”

She brought her hand up to touch his arm, then pulled away quickly, unsure if she should.

“What is it Ron?” Her eyes sparkled in the moonlight that shone through the window.

“There’s something I really want to tell you,” he said finally.

Hermione smiled softly as Ron struggled to find the right words to tell her what he had been trying to tell her for the past half hour.

“So do you want to … um …” Ron blushed furiously, his freckled face turning a bright shade of red she could just make out in the dark.

He watched Hermione closely for her reaction to his unasked question.

The wind blew softly through the open window bristling the hair on the back of Ron’s neck; he shivered.

She whispered yes softly, her eyes on the floor

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palindrome (noun): a word, verse, sentence or a number that reads the same backward or forward. – Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary
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