I'm not a writer, but as a reader I feel like you captured it several times. Like the scene where Arthur describes Ariadne. That was also one of my favourites. It didn't matter who she was. The way he described her made you adore her. And the way you described the town. I can keep going here, but I'll make myself stop:D
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Date: 2011-02-18 07:16 pm (UTC)