That was beautifully-written, very thought-provoking and so enjoyable to read - thank you for sharing it with us! Very original idea - I was totally captivated by the whole concept of the companion system and the temple. I could really feel Adam's loneliness and pain, it was quite heart breaking at times - yet the ending left me feeling warm and fuzzy :)
Congratulations on an excellent piece of writing, I hope we get to read more from you soon!
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Date: 2010-07-31 06:36 pm (UTC)Congratulations on an excellent piece of writing, I hope we get to read more from you soon!